Verbal Foreplay
With compliments like foreplay and his ejaculation of adjectives, I couldn’t help but yield and give way to the river flowing through my hidden canal. How could I say I was a victim to he? When all that I am is a part of he and he and I become we? I flowed like a river holding his boat steadfast and strong, knowing this moment would last all night long. Every word spoken was fluid and sweet, forcing my current to increase taking him deeper. Spilling his vernacular to slay and maim my conscious into blissful captivity. Nature rose and my body froze into molten flesh creating an instant tattoo. There was no denying that still waters ran deep.
© Blu Jewel 2007
Labels: words foreplay
10 Comments:
WOW! That's all have I have too say, just WOW!
WOW is right!!! This is a great piece! I love how you use words in this and I love the visual that I get in my mind when I read it. =)
Very beautiful, Blu. :-)
scratches head*** wow
"His ejaculation of adjectives"
I love that play on words!
Creating an instant tatoo...thas hot!
Indeed, still waters run deep...
For many, many years, I've loved that phrase.
Your comment box hates me tonight. If you get 20 just erase them all..lol. Anyway, great work. Way to come back strong!!
Terry - you? speechless? say it isn't so...lol
urban - any compliment from you in this capacity is one hella compliment. thanks sweetie; you know i wanna be as good as you are *smile*
su - thanks lady...i'd love for you to write something like this, i know you have it in you *wink*
yazmar - thanks for the first time stop by; appreciate the love. i hope that was a good wow?!
mistress - thanks lady...maybe you could use something like that on Mr. K *wink*
daruis - thanks...glad you enjoyed the piece
jojo - happy you stopped by this side of the house. at least this time i didn't make you wanna call a fire truck...lol!
rayne - lol! it's just blogger being on the rag as Honey-Libra would say. glad you liked it; means a lot
Instant tattoo. Yeah I like that. All of it.
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