20 February 2007

CoNfLiCtEd

Tiny places
house monumental
emotions
carefuly guarded
from premature
exposure
to temptations
call
that would
cause
the emination
of carnal
desire
for lust
not loves
sake
thoroughly compromising
the celibacy
of earths
core


© Blu Jewel 2007

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7 Comments:

Blogger Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.uk said...

Tight, crisp and beautiful.

1:04 AM, February 21, 2007  
Blogger Hawa Bond said...

Love it! Lived it. Didn't find the words for it.... until now. *wink*

11:58 AM, February 21, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very nice. I love the words and the way you put them together. I recommend this for the next show.

10:14 PM, February 22, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I'm right there, Blu...

12:21 PM, February 24, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

My My My blu.......

7:24 PM, March 23, 2007  
Blogger Shelle said...

straight to the meat of the matter...good one girl.
like the page.

4:44 PM, March 27, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

What a great way to express the frustration of temptation and the desire to remain self possessed.
Tight.

7:51 PM, June 08, 2007  

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