YeArNiNg
You have been drawn
to my fountain
to drink of my waters
and quench your thirst
you bathed in my pool
floated into ecstasy
to my fountain
to drink of my waters
and quench your thirst
you bathed in my pool
floated into ecstasy
come back again soon
© Blu Jewel 2007
posted by Blu Jewel at 4:24 PM
6 Comments:
I love this Blu.
Your verse reminds me of shiny baubles and other sparkly bits. :-)
This is a beautiful poem, Jewel. I think short poems are so powerful, because we pack so much in a few words.
This poem reminds me of how I feel about someone right now. And as a foutain...I want my waters to remain unquenchable so that he will come back again...and again...and, again!
I love the way this poem makes me feel! Thanks for sharing, Luv!
*muah*
Very nice.
Love this.
terry - glad you enjoyed it
su - shiny baubles huh? nice compliment
urban - yes, short ones are some of my faves...power pack my thoughts and then launch them
rayne - glad you like
hawa - i KNOW you're feeling this!
ummm...gulp
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