simple poem
To be with you is like a late summer rain to the world,
the beginning of colors and romantic gestures,
walks in the park to see the gift of you.
Moments that are captured with soft touches,
and kisses of remembrance,
remembering time,
time when the moment was captured
(c) Blu Jewel 2006
posted by Blu Jewel at 12:59 PM
6 Comments:
Your words blossom like the first shades of spring,
touching me with the warmth of a gentle breeze,
so take me by the hand,
and lead me into your garden of sweet earthly delights,
where -
just for a while
I can drink upon
the juices of your forbidden fruits.
lehane - oh my (mega blush) this is such a sweet comment. I guess I'm drawing out your gentler side. Might have to post this on your site so your readers can see you're not really a gore n guts guy.
rayne - thanks!
It's sweet, Blu.
I love moments. Those sweet, loving, sentimental moments that don't last foever, and you just have to bask in them while they are happening. That's what this piece reminds me off. I haven't had a moment in a while.
su - thanks.
urban - yes, they are indeed beautiful moments and you're right you do have to embrace them for as long as they're happening.
This took me back to high school. Thanks for the walk down memory lane.
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