If
If I had a flower for every time I thought of you
I would walk in a garden all day
If I had a cloud for every time you were away
I would be living in near darkness
If I could kiss you as often as I wanted
A thousand would still not be enough
If I would seize a moment in time to represent you
The clocks would stop forever
(c) Blu Jewel 2006
posted by Blu Jewel at 10:02 AM
7 Comments:
ohhhhhh. this peace made me sigh in all it's beauty and simplicity. you know what? i wanna love like that...
thank you for sharing!
Peace...
If you see an onion ring, answer it.
Very nice! Cookee like.
Blu-tiful!
jus - yeah to love like that would be kinda nice huh?
Fortune - thanks for the stop by and i'm happy you like
rasta - you made me smile...thanks...needed that.
This is beautiful, Blu.
Your poem instantly reminded me of the scent of jasmine and took back to old Chinese folklore with stories like The Nightingale and others.
Beautiful. Almost exactly how I feel right now. I see you're playing mind thief again. "My heart must have died a thousand deaths. I tried to call the cops, that type of thief they can't arrest" - Lauryn Hill.
You created a sentimental piece that pulls at the heartstrings, thanks for sharing. I'm glad to have stumbled upon your page.
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