How It Went Down - The finale
***DISCLAIMER - I DO NOT ADVISE THIS BEING READ AT WORK. That being said, read at your own risk.
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posted by Blu Jewel at 1:35 PM
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16 Comments:
OH MY DAYUM!!!
thank God i stayed at home today!! if anybody out there reads comments BEFORE reading the post... PLEASE take Blu's word for it... if your ass is at work, COME BACK TO THIS ENTRY LATER!!
this is sextra-tight momma!
how come i started clapping at the dialogue that was going on between the characters??? (LOL)
(fanning myself) you should have told me to get a glass of water AND a cigarette before i read this shit!! no need to even check the site meter... i'll be back to read this one again and again and again...
Peace...
Damn, working late tonight. As sore as I am, ain't no way in hell I'm reading this now. LOL
I'll be back later when I can be more uh... comfortable. :-)
Wow, Blu!
You definitely don't mince your words.
Weather man, another round and all that.
Verdict: very, very hot!
My laptop is burning!
jus - you are crazy out your head crazy, but u know i love you for that. glad you liked the finale and at least you were in the comfort and confines of your house when you read it
iron - i made the disclaimer for a reason; maybe next time you'll heed it...lol!
X - you better come back
Su - lol @ laptop burning. Lehane NEEDS to read this
Phew!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you ... what a HOT story ... glad you finished it!!!
I agree with the "phewing" going on here! And I made the mistake of reading this at work! Nowhere to run and hide after that! ;) Only slight thing I would pick up on is a section that doesn't seem to read right/make sense: "Without further comment, he light the match, the ignited the started the flame, that caused 5-alarms fires from the bed to infinity" That might need rewriting?
rasta - u are nuckin futs!
wide - thank you for pointing that out (pun intended) and it is now corrected
DAAAAAANG. that 'head south' line is classic. you really know how to tell an erotic story, sista.
[taking a deep breath...]
OK, let's get to the bottom of this right here, right now. First of all, were you in Jamaica this past weekend? and second, was that you peeping through the keyhole?
LOL, but seriously, this is some VERY hot stuff. And I have the PERFECT photos to illustrate it! We need to talk... uuuuh off-line please. ;-)
PS: I WANT MORE!!!
I'm so jealous! That's all I can say. The way you can write this and the fact that anything remotely resembling this actually happened. I'm jealous! LOL
Oh my figgin goodness Blu! WTF? I need to call my girl NOW! You done started something with this. Now, I wish you'd left it as a teaser.
I'm gonna hafta put limitations on what you can post. You're giving them too much...lol. Nice work. Very Blurotic!
Where's my Bible? I got to do some repenting after reading that story. and where's my blessed oil and why is it suddenly bubbling?
Girl, you oughtta quit. Talkin' 'bout 5 alarms... more like 7 alarms! That bed was on FI.RE! He was the pirate, alright; with all that ravaging and ravishing. Umm, Umm, Umm, (shaking head, squeezing thighs shut, LOL!)
Now, see this is gone be in my dreams tonight. You know every time you read some hot sex you end up reliving the scene in your dreams, LOL! Happy dreaming for me!!! LOL
AND I read it at work!
You were right, I shouldnt have. lol Fiyah!
So you rock like that too huh? My my.
"I brought our premature children closer to delivery"
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