Already Miss
As we broke from our embrace
I felt the warmness of you fade
And before I turned to leave
I already missed you
(c) Blu Jewel 2006
posted by Blu Jewel at 9:06 AM
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5 Comments:
I always like how you take a few lines and say so much with them.
this is beautiful. i've experienced it first hand and you've captured the moment PERFECTLY!
i love it!
Peace...
Right on point. I miss this feeling.
Hi Blu,
What a deep philosophy captured so quickly in this little poem.
You all share the same sentiment and I always appreciate the feedback you give. I'm happy that this little ditty touched each of you the way I intended; just wanted to convey what needed to be said in the least words possible. Moments like this are best captured where less is more.
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