01 May 2007

And so it began...

Removed by author

© BluJewel 2007

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20 Comments:

Blogger Hawa Bond said...

Fighting off the pack to be the first to comment...

Blu. Stop it. Get out of my head and out of my heart. Stop finding words for things that flash through my soul.

This is excellent writing. I don't even know what to say. Bravo. Standing ovation. Encore? hehe

When is the book coming????? *wink*
Love ya!

11:41 AM, May 01, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Im gone need you to find a publishing deal!!!!!!

8:19 PM, May 01, 2007  
Blogger Ms. Confessions said...

That was beautiful Blu!!!

10:25 PM, May 01, 2007  
Blogger Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.uk said...

Blu, there are many passionate messages to take out of this poem, where do i start? :-)

11:46 PM, May 01, 2007  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

Hawa - i'm glad you were the first to read this and even happier that i touched you so deeply. knowing that warms my heart.

yazmar - working on that as we speak. stay tuned.

woman - that you liked it lady...it kinda just rolled up on me and poured itself out through my fingertips.

su - wow! that's a great compliment. thank you so much.

8:13 AM, May 02, 2007  
Blogger Prophetess said...

You already know you write the most eloquent poems, Blu. You need to take a bow and collect the roses from the floor that the audience throws up to you.

You're a special girl.

9:33 AM, May 02, 2007  
Blogger BZ said...

I was sooo with you until the pregnant part, lol (it mirrored MUCH of my weekend *wink* lol). With these words, you brought back vivid images, smells and feelings from my little trip. Thanks for that! :-)

9:41 AM, May 02, 2007  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

hoodoo - *blushing* that was one hella compliment. thank you so much for it.

bz - it's nice to know my poem touched you so deeply and conjured up nice memories...ironically, the nine months part doesn't necessarily have to mean pregnancy...it's more metaphoric for intense growth. now take a DEEP breath...*smile*

9:48 AM, May 02, 2007  
Blogger Prophetess said...

Oh yeah: I finally updated the blog. I was doing it right as you were commenting... come on over, girl!

9:55 AM, May 02, 2007  
Blogger Ms.Honey said...

OF course I only come here when you shamelessly plug yourself LOL...sike let me stop, but once again I'm snapping my fingers over here :)

1:21 PM, May 02, 2007  
Blogger Copasetic Soul said...

me likes the write...if you write it...then plug it....they will come.

3:12 AM, May 03, 2007  
Blogger jendayi said...

HELLO! (I raised my right hand when I said that.) =)

10:11 AM, May 03, 2007  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

honey - when i used to update regularly, most always checked to see if i updated here too; so that's why i have to resort to shameless plugs to get feeback...lol!

copa - that was funny! thanks for stoppping by.

j.a.c - aww! thanks, that means a lot.

10:25 AM, May 03, 2007  
Blogger SLUMP FACADE said...

Undefined by others... ...this is my exact stance, great piece!!! Now how could you think I've stopped blogging? Well, I did for a minute. What have I missed in your world?

11:25 AM, May 03, 2007  
Blogger The Second Sixty-Eight said...

That was tha bomb!!!!

12:35 PM, May 03, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Haaaaaaaaaaay Blu.....

1:00 PM, May 03, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

very, very nice!! loving this piece all that way!! =)

2:49 AM, May 05, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wow; I love it! I'm going to have to start monitoring what you put out here. Some of this is too good for a free forum.

7:19 PM, May 07, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Came thru to view another piece by Blu............but I guess not today

7:43 PM, May 07, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Classy and well done. I like your style.

7:28 PM, June 08, 2007  

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