And so it began...
posted by Blu Jewel at 11:34 AM
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My mind is filled with so many thoughts that it seems like my head is in the sky leaving traces everywhere I go.
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20 Comments:
Fighting off the pack to be the first to comment...
Blu. Stop it. Get out of my head and out of my heart. Stop finding words for things that flash through my soul.
This is excellent writing. I don't even know what to say. Bravo. Standing ovation. Encore? hehe
When is the book coming????? *wink*
Love ya!
Im gone need you to find a publishing deal!!!!!!
That was beautiful Blu!!!
Blu, there are many passionate messages to take out of this poem, where do i start? :-)
Hawa - i'm glad you were the first to read this and even happier that i touched you so deeply. knowing that warms my heart.
yazmar - working on that as we speak. stay tuned.
woman - that you liked it lady...it kinda just rolled up on me and poured itself out through my fingertips.
su - wow! that's a great compliment. thank you so much.
You already know you write the most eloquent poems, Blu. You need to take a bow and collect the roses from the floor that the audience throws up to you.
You're a special girl.
I was sooo with you until the pregnant part, lol (it mirrored MUCH of my weekend *wink* lol). With these words, you brought back vivid images, smells and feelings from my little trip. Thanks for that! :-)
hoodoo - *blushing* that was one hella compliment. thank you so much for it.
bz - it's nice to know my poem touched you so deeply and conjured up nice memories...ironically, the nine months part doesn't necessarily have to mean pregnancy...it's more metaphoric for intense growth. now take a DEEP breath...*smile*
Oh yeah: I finally updated the blog. I was doing it right as you were commenting... come on over, girl!
OF course I only come here when you shamelessly plug yourself LOL...sike let me stop, but once again I'm snapping my fingers over here :)
me likes the write...if you write it...then plug it....they will come.
HELLO! (I raised my right hand when I said that.) =)
honey - when i used to update regularly, most always checked to see if i updated here too; so that's why i have to resort to shameless plugs to get feeback...lol!
copa - that was funny! thanks for stoppping by.
j.a.c - aww! thanks, that means a lot.
Undefined by others... ...this is my exact stance, great piece!!! Now how could you think I've stopped blogging? Well, I did for a minute. What have I missed in your world?
That was tha bomb!!!!
Haaaaaaaaaaay Blu.....
very, very nice!! loving this piece all that way!! =)
Wow; I love it! I'm going to have to start monitoring what you put out here. Some of this is too good for a free forum.
Came thru to view another piece by Blu............but I guess not today
Classy and well done. I like your style.
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