11 July 2007

The Ultimate Love

Removed by author

(c) Blu Jewel 2007

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14 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

You are right! I absolutely love it! I kept anticipating the end and stood up when I got there. Bravo!

7:57 AM, July 11, 2007  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

sojo - so glad you enjoyed it. you brough a big smile to my face when you said you stood up at the end.

8:35 AM, July 11, 2007  
Blogger Mizrepresent said...

Oh yeah, you and Soj are both right there with your pieces. Excellent! It's like this pic my mom has in her bathroom of jesus on the cross, and it states, "you ask me, how much i love you...this much.." and he stretches out his arms and dies.

1:33 PM, July 11, 2007  
Blogger Believer said...

His gift washes over me like rain it brings me to a place of love that I've never felt before!

This is too good not to share on my Chrristian blog. Thanks for waking my sleepy spirit!

8:29 PM, July 11, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wow, Blu...

I'm speechless.

You've touched my heart with this one.

I love you.

5:11 PM, July 12, 2007  
Blogger Lyrically speaking said...

Very profound piece...
Happy Friday Miss Blu

1:17 PM, July 13, 2007  
Blogger Chari said...

Nice.

8:35 PM, July 16, 2007  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

miz - i had that same image as i wrote this...the poem stemmed from me thinking about love and losing it, but through it all, He has always remained there for me

rose - i'm happy to hear that you were moved and also thanks for adding this to your site

urban - wow! that's one huge compliment coming from you. thanks sweetie.

lyrically - thank you and it means much coming from she who's publshed!

mystery - thank you and thanks for stopping by.

7:03 AM, July 17, 2007  
Blogger Unknown said...

Dayum! That poem is deep and the end came at me unexpectedly. Very well done!

peace, Villager

7:04 PM, July 17, 2007  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

That was very deep and simply beautiful!

12:24 AM, July 24, 2007  
Blogger Rich Fitzgerald said...

Ok, that was nice. I was imagining it was a guy that stuck by you while you ran and played and by some stroke of misfortune, he died right before you got it together, but this ending was even better. Similar outcome, but in this case, HE lives!

12:38 PM, July 30, 2007  
Blogger The OE said...

It looks like someone infiltrated your defenses. I hope National security was not damaged.

8:57 PM, August 31, 2007  
Blogger Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.uk said...

Why have you removed all these poetry, Blu?

10:03 AM, October 25, 2007  
Blogger Unknown said...

YEah why have you removed them all?
http://triplerdeezee.blogspot.com/

4:07 PM, January 03, 2008  

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