The Ultimate Love
posted by Blu Jewel at 7:25 AM
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13 Comments:
You are right! I absolutely love it! I kept anticipating the end and stood up when I got there. Bravo!
sojo - so glad you enjoyed it. you brough a big smile to my face when you said you stood up at the end.
Oh yeah, you and Soj are both right there with your pieces. Excellent! It's like this pic my mom has in her bathroom of jesus on the cross, and it states, "you ask me, how much i love you...this much.." and he stretches out his arms and dies.
His gift washes over me like rain it brings me to a place of love that I've never felt before!
This is too good not to share on my Chrristian blog. Thanks for waking my sleepy spirit!
Wow, Blu...
I'm speechless.
You've touched my heart with this one.
I love you.
Very profound piece...
Happy Friday Miss Blu
Nice.
miz - i had that same image as i wrote this...the poem stemmed from me thinking about love and losing it, but through it all, He has always remained there for me
rose - i'm happy to hear that you were moved and also thanks for adding this to your site
urban - wow! that's one huge compliment coming from you. thanks sweetie.
lyrically - thank you and it means much coming from she who's publshed!
mystery - thank you and thanks for stopping by.
Dayum! That poem is deep and the end came at me unexpectedly. Very well done!
peace, Villager
That was very deep and simply beautiful!
Ok, that was nice. I was imagining it was a guy that stuck by you while you ran and played and by some stroke of misfortune, he died right before you got it together, but this ending was even better. Similar outcome, but in this case, HE lives!
It looks like someone infiltrated your defenses. I hope National security was not damaged.
Why have you removed all these poetry, Blu?
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