my new lover
His subtle whisper calls me
Memory of our serendipitous meeting
Arouses me and recollection
Of his warmth
Course my veins like a narcotic
Leaving me engulfed in
A euphoric state
Falling carelessly into
His bed of granular softness
My new found lover
Seduces me effortlessly
And I relinquished myself
Shamelessly though I’m not
His first or his last
Though I’d prefer him
To be surreptitiously mine
He'll never concede
But like a moth to a flame
I’ll go to him again and again
I miss you my lover
I miss you Negril
© BluJewel 2007
Memory of our serendipitous meeting
Arouses me and recollection
Of his warmth
Course my veins like a narcotic
Leaving me engulfed in
A euphoric state
Falling carelessly into
His bed of granular softness
My new found lover
Seduces me effortlessly
And I relinquished myself
Shamelessly though I’m not
His first or his last
Though I’d prefer him
To be surreptitiously mine
He'll never concede
But like a moth to a flame
I’ll go to him again and again
I miss you my lover
I miss you Negril
© BluJewel 2007
posted by Blu Jewel at 9:29 PM
9 Comments:
awww, nice drop.
Wow! Loved this, Jewel! You had my mouth watering for your lover!! lol
Negril is gorgeous! I hope to visit JA very, very soon. It's so beautiful there. Glad you enjoyed yourself!
Course my veins like a narcotic
My, My, My girl you betta hursh ya mouth....that is my favorite line....
Hmmmm anything that can get you on a Euphoric high is something to be desired.....hmmmm hmmmm hmmmm
Negril is def beautiful...you must give a rundown on your time there if you would like to share...woah I must say that I thought about you on the trip and how you must be having the time of your life
copa - thanks for the love
urban - there is another pic, but it didn't post, so i'll have to add it again. when the poem was marinating in my head, i really felt the words as if Negril were really a man. it's such a beautiful place to be.
yaz - glad you loved those lines. they're actaully my fave also and it's exactly how i felt while i was there. at your request, i'll post about it on my other blog.
Poetic. Captivating. Keeping my attention with each word, every line. Thank you for the introduction to Negril.
It sounds as if you are making plans to stay someday, and it looks good on you!
Certainly a featured post on VOMM.
This is well crafted. I must admit,at first I was fooled.
It is one of the things I admire most anout your poetry, it's always very well structured.
You have the ability that to connect emotionally the subjet matter, which in turn connects us. That's why I love reading your writings.
They take me places.
Oooohh...can I go? Well actually, it's going to be Atlantic City. Somehow I think the sentiment will be different. Probably something about dirty streets, polluted boardwalks and superficial people. Of course I could be wrong...
(You gotta be like, "why are you going?!} Open mind.
Beautiful. Makes me want to go!dcjuut
Blu, That is some hot shyt! Your pen is drippin sensuality...
My bad, that's me, See what you did? :-)
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