31 August 2006

Flesh for Fantasy

Thoughts of what we could do together
Seer through my mind causing love’s divine
Spectacle of our bodies entwined
Forming a unique mélange of asymmetrical mastery
Day and night dreams of pleasure infinite
Arouse vagarious fantasies yet to be explored
Words defile what actions can express
Release from this bondage yet to be satiated

© Blu Jewel 2006

This piece was inspired by the Billy Idol song
Flesh For Fantasy

3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Again, some of the shortest pieces say the most. You're doing great with this style.

But don't give them too much too soon, save some for the books.

1:27 PM, August 31, 2006  
Blogger Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.uk said...

A poem that hints of vivid formations while caught in a dramatic moment. Pictures made up of feelings, are easy to visualise.
Top-class, Blu!

11:04 AM, September 01, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

You took fantasies to a new place with this one. Man, I wish...nevermined, dont wanna get myself in trouble.

2:12 PM, September 05, 2006  

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