rAnDoM pOeTiC mOmEnT #3
at the water's edge
i wash away my fears
wishing for the respective tranquilty
this moment here gives
me peace of mind
as i watch
ripples trace and kiss the water
stirring from my intrusion
how easy for it to forget
for it's shape is never solid
ever flowing and ever new
i envy its life
and anger at the human form
too rigid to bend or bow
far too wanting
to ever stay still
at the rivers edge
i wash away my fears
for it's the only place
they wont come back to me
(c) blu jewel 2006
posted by Blu Jewel at 9:11 PM
7 Comments:
Beautiful, Blu...
there's something about the imagery with the water that makes the piece extremely tranquil although it's terribly melancholy.
it makes me want to sigh. i loved it. thank you for releasing this into the universe...
Peace, darlin'! Today, Be... forever joyful!
Tranquility always triumphs and makes for that splendid listening ear!
Beautifully written as always, Blu.
Beautiful piece.
I THINK THAT THIS WAS WONDERFUL
Yeah, exactly what BBFli said, but a little mo better!!!!
This has a tranquil feel to it. very deep- like the waters- and it flows so smoothly- like the quite rivers.
I love this piece!! Reminds me of myself!
Oh my! This one hit home cause I just went through a rough time (loosing Big Mama) and we always used to go to the river to clear our minds when I was younger. This one kinda brought tears to my eyes. Good ones though. Thanks.
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