24 October 2006

Our Melody

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(c) Blu Jewel 2006

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12 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

You know you got me with this one. I love how you relate it to Music. HOT!!! I think I feel a little inspiration coming on :-)

2:34 PM, October 24, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

That's some great music you've written Blu. You're gonna make me dig up some jazz or some other instrumental to read this to.

Rayne, what's Blu on, she's killin 'em again?

3:32 PM, October 24, 2006  
Blogger layne bowden said...

blu
damn! this is some hot shit! fa real. i think i started humming the second time i read it... and i didn't even realize i was doing it.

i love it! it just proves, you don't need a lot of words to convey a strong and sensual message.

Peace!

3:52 PM, October 24, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I play a symphony with his body
that only we two can hear


mmmm hmmmm

I like you

5:35 PM, October 24, 2006  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

rayne - you know I had to post something for you (smile)

JC -thanks for the compliments. I don't even know where some of this stuff comes from. As long as you all like it, then that's good enough for me. I hope you found a good selection to accompany the poem

Jus - had you humming huh? Whoa! I must have really done the thing here.

Sexy White Man - Hey luv! I'm so happy you stopped by and I'm even happier that you enjoyed the read. I hope you become a regular.

10:15 PM, October 24, 2006  
Blogger Sleekblackmercedes said...

Hi blujewel,
how have you been? I've got a new site called - the romantic verses

http://theromanticverses.blogspot.com/

You may like it. cheers!

9:53 AM, October 25, 2006  
Blogger nikki said...

yummy!

you know i totally love your poetry!

11:57 AM, October 25, 2006  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

Sleekblack - missed you man...it's been a while. I'll definitely check you out.

Nikki - thanks for the comps, means a lot.

1:56 PM, October 25, 2006  
Blogger Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.uk said...

"...perform their oratory salutation
like a conductor to his orchestra,"

These lines make for a terrific imagery, Blu.
Watching your blue note twinkle, I remember I was first drawn to your blog by your animations.

3:40 AM, October 26, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

This one tickles, and YES that is a compliment!

1:50 AM, October 28, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

WOW!!! I love this Blu! Yummy! =)

12:07 PM, October 28, 2006  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

X - (smiling) I'm happy that you felt this one.

UB - thanks always for your supporst and I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

4:22 PM, October 28, 2006  

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